Whispers of the Valley Breeze by (2 Stories)

Prompted By Dawn

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As dawn approaches, the silent night sky fades away,
Fresh and gentle like petals caressed by a breeze.
Women are waking from their dreams,
With determination and confidence to face the new day.

Like cherry blossoms blooming in Japan,
Women’s power is also revealed here.
They symbolize the courage and beauty of life,
And in this new dawn, they will sparkle more brilliantly.

As light as the morning mist,
Women gather wisdom and strength on their way forward,
Creatively changing the world in their unique way,
Making it full of genuine equality and respect.

Pure like Japanese maids,
Women break free from worldly constraints and restrictions,
Creating their own legends with unwavering faith.

In this rapidly changing world,
Women shoulder more responsibilities and missions,
But they never stop exploring and growing,
Moving towards a brighter future.

Let us together call for the coming of dawn,
Carrying the power and wisdom of women,
Making this world more beautiful and equal,
Fighting for equality, never defeated!

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Characterizations: moving, right on!, well written

Comments

  1. Betsy Pfau says:

    “Let us call for the coming of dawn”. Your message of sisterhood and empowerment is wonderful, coming as it does on the first anniversary of the overturning Roe v. Wade. I join you in the call for a renewed new dawn of sisterhood, Amy. Your poem was lovely and delicate as new cherry blossoms, yet powerful as we women warriors are!

    • Amy says:

      Betsy,Thank you for your appreciation and kind comment on my poem! I’m delighted that you could feel the message of sisterhood and women empowerment that I intended to convey. As you mentioned, it is fitting that this message is being shared on the first anniversary of the overturning of Roe v. Wade. I am grateful for your participation in calling for a renewed new dawn of sisterhood. Your comment and metaphors are truly beautiful, describing my poem as lovely and delicate as blooming cherry blossoms, yet powerful as we women warriors are!

  2. Khati Hendry says:

    This poem evokes the awakening of the new day and the awakening of women’s strength and potential. It is very hopeful and positive. We need confidence that something new and better is possible, and each new day is a new opportunity. Nicely said.

    • Amy says:

      Khati ,Thank you for your thoughtful comment on my poem! I’m glad that you found it evocative and hopeful, capturing the awakening of women’s strength and potential along with the dawn of a new day. Confidence is indeed essential in our journey towards progress and equality, and each new day presents us with fresh opportunities for growth and change. I appreciate your kind words and your understanding of the underlying message. Let’s continue to believe in the possibility of something new and better, and work together to make the world more beautiful and equal.

  3. pattyv says:

    Amy, your ardent quest for women’s equality is so beautifully expressed. I love how you compared Dawn to a new beginning for us, knowing it’s just a matter of time in which the world will acknowledge us for who we are. The cherry blossom symbolism with its delicate petals captured both the beauty of your country and the gentle stirrings of female acknowledgement.

    • Amy says:

      Pattyv, Thank you so much for your heartfelt comment on my poem! I’m touched by your appreciation for my ardent quest for women’s equality, and I’m glad that you found it beautifully expressed. Comparing dawn to a new beginning for women signifies the hope that, with time, the world will fully recognize and acknowledge us for who we are. The symbolism of cherry blossoms and their delicate petals not only captures the beauty of my country but also represents the gentle stirrings of female acknowledgement and empowerment. Your thoughtful interpretation resonates with my intentions behind the poem, and I am grateful for your kind words. Let’s continue to strive for a world where equality and respect for women prevail. Thank you for your support!

  4. Thanx Amy for your optimistic words!

    I join you in your hope that each dawn will bring a better and brighter day for us all.

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