The Sisters Remember by
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Prompted By Theater

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(Yes, I have tricks in my pocket, I have things up my sleeve. 

But I am the opposite of a stage magician. 

He gives you illusion that has the appearance of truth. 

I give you truth in the pleasant disguise of illusion”) 

― Tennessee Williams, The Glass Menagerie

 

The Sisters Remember

 

My sister’s dream began on a hillside.

Having no idea where she was

she stumbled through a black forest,

caught her lace nightgown on a dead branch,

came to an open field of weeds.

 

Barefoot and alone

she walked forever under cloudy skies,

jumping over mud holes and daubers,

scanning the distance for anyone alive.

Suddenly visible stood a barren stage.

 

She hesitated at the strangeness

but had nowhere else to go.

As she approached the wooden scaffold

she noticed several rows of velvet chairs

unoccupied, but waiting.

She sat first row, front-center.

 

On the stage were also chairs

An array of golden benches

seemingly strung together by rope,

empty and alert.

All at once out of the curtained wings 

the actors came forward.

 

Each one bowed before sitting,

saluting my sister. 

Each one was someone she knew.

Each actor a departed luminary

who bought their light to the stage,

who acted out the play book

of timeline characters

and tragic goodbyes.

 

There are no goodbyes.

The troupe on stage was whole

and accounted for,

soul-beings of her glorious past.

The director’s light entered the arena

just as my sister stood up to leap forward

the curtain fell

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Comments

  1. Betsy Pfau says:

    This is stunning, Patty, along so many dimensions. What a way to salute your sister.

  2. Thanx for another of your intriguing poems Patty!
    This especially moved me because I lost a sister to a devastating illness … among other gifts, she was a wonderful poet.

  3. I found a lot of the imagery really powerful and lyrical, even if I wasn’t sure how to interpet them. For instance, “caught her lace nightgown on a dead branch,” and “golden benches seemingly strung together by rope. ” Thanks for this offering.

  4. Khati Hendry says:

    If this was indeed the dream your sister had, it was remarkable. If it is something you invented, it is even more remarkable and full of love in either case. Thanks.

    • pattyv says:

      Yes indeed K, it was a dream. A powerful one, one both my sis and I never forgot. I tried to capture it exactly the way it happened. It confirmed my believe we are actors on a stage, or in today’s words – avatars in a simulation.

  5. Dave Ventre says:

    I think that this piece is made all the more interesting for me by what I don’t know (which is everything) but must imagine.

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