“Shelter From The Storm” the Storm Door by
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Prompted By Lightning

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My mom believed her daughters were safe

in a house filled with friends

An unlocked side door became an opening

to the cellar stairs 

where the neighborhood kids just walked in.

 

The basement was a club house

filled with homemade ice tea and cookies,

a record player of Motown tunes, then mostly Dylan hits,

board games like Monopoly and Risk,

Chess for the captain players who thought a lot,

a dance floor for the girls.

 

Painted pink and gray 

this place reserved its future space

in all our minds until this very day,

our sanctuary of sorts, 

like a most fitting Dylan song-

‘Shelter From The Storm’

 

On this one day in April everyone came in

as the rain pounded the streets.

The alleyway turned into a flood zone.

The handle to the side door broke,

so we took turns to open it.

 

Thunder startled us,

so loud we jumped out of our shoes

laughing at ourselves, hiding

our teenage cowardice 

inside uncontrolled giggles 

as we held each other close.

 

The lightning pierced through us,

surrounding all the windows at once.

Lighting up the pink walls, 

as it traveled around the house,

leaving a ghostly spotlight in our eyes.

 

I was the first to challenge it.

To dare it’s menace on our home,

with foolish adolescent bravery 

I ran up the stairs to the door, 

standing behind the glass window 

looking eye to eye at the storm.

 

There were at least four of us 

at that aluminum door,

mesmerized by the furious beauty

of wind, rain, thunder, lightning, powerful

fear.

 

When the bolt hit the window’s frame

we jumped the entire flight of stairs. 

Closest I ever came to being zapped

out of existence, fried forever in one second

by a force in nature not to be denied.

 

We recovered in the comfort of friends

who helped us catch our breaths,

giving us some fresh brewed, cold ice tea, 

never mentioning our stupidity or tears.

 

A definite memory of the club house years.

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Characterizations: , moving, well written

Comments

  1. Dave Ventre says:

    Way too close for comfort!

  2. Betsy Pfau says:

    Quite the memory, but steeped in friendship and camaraderie, so the tunes played on and the friends were there for comfort from the storm.

  3. Mister Ed says:

    Great, scary story. Very nicely written!

  4. Thanx Patty for sharing another of your lovely memory poems.
    You’ve so well expressed your teenage sense of invulnerability and bravado suddenly shaken by the storm as it invaded your safe haven below your cellar stairs.

  5. Khati Hendry says:

    Lightning (and nature) really demands respect—it is bigger than we are. Chastened, you found solace in the clubhouse. Lovely story.

  6. Laurie Levy says:

    I love this poem. It captures so much of what I remember from the era you describe, although I never came as close as you did to being struck by lightning.

  7. Jim Willis says:

    You use your gift for poetry well in describing the impact of this storm on you, Patty.

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